Bon the only mistake you have made on your joints asessment is you have labelled one elbow joint as being in abduction. Hinge joints like the elbow can only allow flexion and extention. Please change to increase from a PASS to a merit.
Bon unfortunately you failed the CV system work as you missed the assessment task and have not done the re take task. However as you have passed the other assessments in AO1 you can still pass the assessment objective.
Bon your nervous system work is very good and it is interesting that you have included your own actually consultation from your neck injury. In order to take it from a MERIT to a distinction you will need to further explain the use and structure of the motor neurones and motor units.
Bon it is brilliant that you have used a diet assessment online to give you advice on your diet however the source i am a little unsure of. To take this work from a MERIT to a distinction yuo need to tell me a little more about the diet requirements of a professional footballer. i.e. whats types of food would they need to eat, what percentage of carbs, fats and proteins would they need to eat, when would they need to eat e.g. pre match meals.
Bon the only mistake you have made on your joints asessment is you have labelled one elbow joint as being in abduction. Hinge joints like the elbow can only allow flexion and extention. Please change to increase from a PASS to a merit.
ReplyDeleteBon your skeletal system assessment was brilliant. Well done. DISTINCTION.
ReplyDeleteBon unfortunately you failed the CV system work as you missed the assessment task and have not done the re take task. However as you have passed the other assessments in AO1 you can still pass the assessment objective.
ReplyDeleteBon your nervous system work is very good and it is interesting that you have included your own actually consultation from your neck injury. In order to take it from a MERIT to a distinction you will need to further explain the use and structure of the motor neurones and motor units.
ReplyDeleteBon it is brilliant that you have used a diet assessment online to give you advice on your diet however the source i am a little unsure of. To take this work from a MERIT to a distinction yuo need to tell me a little more about the diet requirements of a professional footballer. i.e. whats types of food would they need to eat, what percentage of carbs, fats and proteins would they need to eat, when would they need to eat e.g. pre match meals.
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